Tuesday, November 17, 2009

So an another stranded on an island.....?

so u recovered from the last island game and now ur back in the city, but u the city is overwhealmed for u and u miss the simlicity of the island but u also met ur future fiance and u promised her that u will be waiting an another island on with u will prepare the living standards. And beacuse ur not very rich u only afford to rent a small plane to get there ( boats or ships are not available, cause a strange thing are happening when u get to close with boats, they just dissappear), and u can pack only a few stuff and on the island there are a few palm trees, a parrot, an adolesen bird who was left from the migration behind and 5000 bottles of the greates whiskey hidden by some pirates and was left there years ago. So the question is what stuff would u bring to the island to make the accomodations for u and ur future wife? And write exactly how will u use the stuff u brought and on the island.

So an another stranded on an island.....?
I would make sure my future wife could type out words completely, then I would bring comfortable bedding, a couple of easy chairs, TV and a satellite. Ad solar panels to power it all.
Reply:u think u are cute, but when u use 'u' too much it make me not wanting to finish it. I hope it was funny
Reply:pack the whiskey and sell it





thats too long to read u shud make it less
Reply:Tips:


1. Don't use the word 'u' too much, especially in the wrong places. 'but u the city is overwhelmed...'


2. Use MORE punctuation.


3. Get straight to the point. i got bored: it was too long.


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